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Original: [link]
Concept art for the characters of Radiant Omen. In order:
Fei, Priam, Flynn, Rylus
Maire, Ciara, Eirwyn, Aleta (with Linn and Del)
Ektor, ????, Lyeris, ????
Sia, Cenori, Liliko, Naniru
Okay, fixed a few things based on some criticism, and didn't fix other things for various reasons. (Didn't fix the long necks and other anatomical issues, because they're just costume references, but I noted it to watch out for next time, so thanks just the same.
)
Added some small details on those characters that it made sense to. Experimented a little on Aleta - I thought kimono-like designs might be somewhat common so I gave her some lighter-coloreddoodles designs on one side. Probably too much.
Gave Sia stripes because I didn't think just pink did her awful fashion sense justice.
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So, let's play the comment game! To obtain points from this deviation...
For 5 points...
- Which one of the characters did you notice the most change in?
- Pick any character and tell me whether you like the changes I've made to them or not. For extra points, tell me why.
- Do you think the overall change is better or worse?
For 10 points...
- When you tell me what you don't like about a character, give me a suggestion on how to improve it.
Bonus points!
- Pick a character here and tell me what weapon you imagine them using.
Learn more about the comment game in this journal: [link]
Concept art for the characters of Radiant Omen. In order:
Fei, Priam, Flynn, Rylus
Maire, Ciara, Eirwyn, Aleta (with Linn and Del)
Ektor, ????, Lyeris, ????
Sia, Cenori, Liliko, Naniru
Okay, fixed a few things based on some criticism, and didn't fix other things for various reasons. (Didn't fix the long necks and other anatomical issues, because they're just costume references, but I noted it to watch out for next time, so thanks just the same.
)Added some small details on those characters that it made sense to. Experimented a little on Aleta - I thought kimono-like designs might be somewhat common so I gave her some lighter-colored
Gave Sia stripes because I didn't think just pink did her awful fashion sense justice.
-------------------------------------------
So, let's play the comment game! To obtain points from this deviation...
For 5 points...
- Which one of the characters did you notice the most change in?
- Pick any character and tell me whether you like the changes I've made to them or not. For extra points, tell me why.
- Do you think the overall change is better or worse?
For 10 points...
- When you tell me what you don't like about a character, give me a suggestion on how to improve it.
Bonus points!
- Pick a character here and tell me what weapon you imagine them using.
Learn more about the comment game in this journal: [link]
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Well the first real change I noticed, and one with a rather large amount of change in the overall cleanliness of his image and detail of his outfit was ... Rylus? The priestish one.
I absolutely loved Sia's change. Even though it was small, the striped pink sweater and matching long socks make her adorable and really adds a bit more... character to her character! So of course, overall the change is better. Really all the changes I've noticed since the original are fantabulous. Yes. I know that is not a word. I don't care.
However, as almost always, I do have some critiques. We'll start with Lyeris. My biggest complaints really are that one: his colour scheme, while I understand why he wears what he wears, is just... a bit unimaginative compared to the others. The other problem I noticed was that his image especially seemed a bit too broad-shouldered for his overall build and it gave him a very stiff appearance.
Cenori is another one whose shoulders seem a bit too broad, though that may simply be because of her hand placement. However, I also want to point out that the shoulders of her dress just seem awkward, and it makes her overall chest look off to me. I wouldn't exactly suggest narrowing the actual shoulder proportions, but I think if you draped her sleeves from the edge of her shoulders instead of below her shoulders, and then lift and fill out her bust a bit more, she will look much better.
Liliko is.... adorable. I love this character. And I can see her using a fairly hefty double-edged European greatsword.
Finally, Eirwyn is SOOO CUTE! I love her! She's adorable and huggable, and... and... WIN!
I absolutely loved Sia's change. Even though it was small, the striped pink sweater and matching long socks make her adorable and really adds a bit more... character to her character! So of course, overall the change is better. Really all the changes I've noticed since the original are fantabulous. Yes. I know that is not a word. I don't care.
However, as almost always, I do have some critiques. We'll start with Lyeris. My biggest complaints really are that one: his colour scheme, while I understand why he wears what he wears, is just... a bit unimaginative compared to the others. The other problem I noticed was that his image especially seemed a bit too broad-shouldered for his overall build and it gave him a very stiff appearance.
Cenori is another one whose shoulders seem a bit too broad, though that may simply be because of her hand placement. However, I also want to point out that the shoulders of her dress just seem awkward, and it makes her overall chest look off to me. I wouldn't exactly suggest narrowing the actual shoulder proportions, but I think if you draped her sleeves from the edge of her shoulders instead of below her shoulders, and then lift and fill out her bust a bit more, she will look much better.
Liliko is.... adorable. I love this character. And I can see her using a fairly hefty double-edged European greatsword.
Finally, Eirwyn is SOOO CUTE! I love her! She's adorable and huggable, and... and... WIN!